Auckland New Zealand
Joined on 11/13/04
Posted by Lucky - April 20th, 2012
Started a web comic a few weeks, ago. Trying my hardest to keep dialogue to the minimum, check it out if you've got 5 minutes :)www.spikescomic.com
Looking pretty good, although it looks a bit hard to follow, some images weren't entirely clear.
Some things could have been pointed out better too, even though it was obvious she got hurt from kicking the cactus, it'd be, in my opinion that is, better to show it by showing a sting through her foot or at least when she puts her foot away, there's still something in her it. But instead you only see some pretty randomly placed blood drops and not even a real wound.
Further when she stumbles away, I don't really know what the long stroke is supposed to resemble, a long walk or something?
But that's just my view on it, don't take my opinions for facts, overall it's still looking great.
(Updated 2012-04-21 08:25:12)
iii like it, thanks! The long stroke is meant to be blood but i guess its not that clear with the limited color scheme. Its still quite experimental and im flinging any idea for a comic panel shape or pose i think off, the thing with the foot i didnt think i made it as obvious as i should have you're right
i'll note that for next time. though there'll probly be other mistakes too its helpfull when people point out the stuff, which to me makes sense, but to you it doesnt because i didnt explain it well enough
thanks for that!